Left Knife on my heart
He forgot; his Dementia
Took my life, my loss!
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Dear You, Thank you from my heart for spending your precious time reading my words.
For You: "You're incredible! Never let the doubts of others dim your light. You are one of a kind, and your aura shines brighter than anyone’s."
About the Creator
Maryam Batool
Turned 18!
I'm a storyteller who loves poems, fiction, and romance. Creativity is my constant companion. I take joy in turning thoughts into worlds. Writing is my way of exploring life and connecting with others
Life's HARD, trust me! I'm already a little tired. But, I gotta live anyway!
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It's your smile
Expression of warmth Something you hide as it's debt Your mirth; it's your smile! . . Thank you for reading it. I guess the thrill of Haiku poems is that you can draw many different reflections from a few words. It can always be seen from many different perspectives. It's time to share your thoughts!
By Maryam Batoolabout a year ago in Poets
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Wow! Girl congratulations dear on winning 3rd place for Best Emerging Creator 🤗🎉🎉. I'm very happy for you 😊
Congratulations on placing third for Best Emerging Creator on this week's leaderboard with this piece. Well done.
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A heartache where memory fades, leaving a sharp, silent pain. The person you knew is gone, even while they remain. I don’t even know what I wrote! Haha 😂😂 But you write with such depth, it’s an amazing art. My sister, don’t go too deep, or one day you might drown, it’s dangerous.😃😃😃 Honestly, this is very impactful.✨
Wow, such a touching haiku. Thanks for the word of encouragement at the end ♥︎✨