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Light clings to the dark,
a promise that night will fade;
hope learns how to bloom.
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I especially loved the last line! Such a beautiful poem!
Love the photo choice. Makes it feel like you're giving us something. Giving us a flower to uplift us. The flower being your words. That we should look at the natural order — light clings to the dark to give us a new day. Because of that new day, hope should bloom. Wow. Loved every bit of this. Perfect timing too. 🤗❤️