Help Me
O the Planner of all causes,
O the Opener of all doors,
Help me.
This haiku is a quiet prayer rising from a heart standing at the edge of uncertainty. In moments when every path seems blocked and human strength feels small, the soul turns toward the unseen force that plans every cause and opens every door. With only a few words, the poem captures a deep longing for guidance, mercy, and relief. It reminds us that even in silence and helplessness, a sincere call for help can travel beyond our limits and reach the One who holds the keys to every possibility.
Comments (12)
Very clever. I know my amygdala probably leaks daily. Congratulations on your win❤️
That was cleverly done! Congratulations in placing in this Challenge 😄
Clever and unique! Congratulations Morgana. Whoooohooo! 🥰
Ooooh, yes! So much going on here, I love it
Wow!! This one was amazing.
I guess fear and anxiety will always resurface at some point. Some times they appear on the calmest most perfect of days, other times they arrive when everything's going to heck. Nice win on the time capsule challenge. How do You do it? This is the 4th win You've racked up.
A top contender. Visceral, harsh, primeval, and beautiful.
This one's good
Beautiful!!!💖💖💕
Metaphorical meets the biological (or is that psychological?)... Great construction and intense imaging here! 🫙
Ohhhh, you had me with amygdala...love, love, love!!
Now you're making look up words.....Well done.