Shameless is my fall
I lived full fruitful seasons
Now I ride the wind
How does it work?
This is a beautiful metaphor for life that ties in so well with the prompt. Nicely done! c:
I absolutely love how you became the leaf. How your fall is shameless. The way you lived a fruitful season. Riding the wind. Was a nice touch for the last line. Fantastic work, George 🤗❤️
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This is a beautiful metaphor for life that ties in so well with the prompt. Nicely done! c:
I absolutely love how you became the leaf. How your fall is shameless. The way you lived a fruitful season. Riding the wind. Was a nice touch for the last line. Fantastic work, George 🤗❤️